With issue #14, the current Moon Knight run comes to a close. Do we get answers for any of the several questions this volume has raised? If not, is the ending still satisfactory in its own open-endedness?

Moon Knight #14
Writer: Jeff Lemire
Artist: Greg Smallwood
Publisher: Marvel Comics


Thus far, this volume of Moon Knight has walked a tightrope between sparse, yet compelling detail and incoherence. Marc Spector has frequently found himself unsure of what around him is real versus a delusion resulting from his mental illness. That ambiguity continues in this issue to mixed effect. On one hand, the frequent changes in time and location can easily be chalked up to Marc not fully knowing the truth himself. One could debate how many concrete answers this finale needs to deliver, but even if this issue doesn’t feature a lot of solid answers, I still feel a bit disappointed by the way the ending was executed.

I think the numerous changes in scene in this issue hinder the overall flow of the story. Many of the scenes feel underdeveloped, as Marc shifts from the past to the present to a different present to the past again, and it’s hard to feel grounded in any of the issue’s events. The final showdown with Khonshu feels rushed, and the ways in which Marc interacts with his alternate personas suffer slightly from a lack of narrative consistency. The final battle, which is essentially between Marc and himself, had the potential to be great, but felt shortchanged by a lack of build-up with regards to Marc’s thought process.

Artistically, this is a good issue. Greg Smallwood’s pencils are detailed without ever feeling too busy. He renders Marc’s facial expressions skillfully, and Khonshu has an otherworldly aura that is very fitting for a god. My main con with the artwork is that several pages use the exact same four-panel layout. This repetition staggers the visuals in a way that makes them feel a little less dynamic; the compositional choices don’t always feel optimized to fit the content on the page.

Even if the execution doesn’t feel perfect, I applaud writer Jeff Lemire for directly tackling Moon Knight’s mental illness in a new way. Marc addresses his struggles, and their inevitability, in a fight scene that is more about Marc finding peace with himself than taking down his opponent. The issue ends ambiguously, and for all the issue’s faults, there is a kernel of emotional truth here that still hits close to home. While I wish that certain aspects of the narrative had been paced differently, this is still a solid ending to a moving chapter in Moon Knight’s history.

Moon Knight #14
Is it good?
There are some pacing issues here and some of the composition choices get repetitive, but this is still a fitting conclusion to the current Moon Knight series, with a emotionally impacting ending.
The ending reads true emotionally
The art is beautiful as always
Some of the pacing could have been more effective
At this point, some of the past/present intermingling feels a bit predictable
Your mileage may vary on how satisfying the lack of concrete answers is
7
Good

  • jamesbryan91

    I thought this issue was great. Normally I always agree with your analysis but, this I think is a little deeper than your taking it. I could be wrong as well, but I see this as Marc reaching his insanity, confronting it and realizing that this whole Moon Knight, Konshu relationship has been a fallacy. I saw this as his mind taking his beginning and end with Konshu and destroying it from his brain. If the next volume of Moon Knight is taken up by a writer that wants to switch it up, they could literally use Marc as a hero that had mental issues throughout life, created a deity to cope with almost dying and now he is free from his minds creations but, at this point can do this on his own because, he realizes he has been on his own the whole time. I could also be digging too deep but, that is how I took it and I really enjoyed it.